Freedom from the demands of work or duty
is known as leisure. During this time of relaxation, one can choose to do a
numerous amount of things such as read a book, spend time with family and
friends, or sleep. All this independence is the reason why leisure time is
desired by so many. Unfortunately, George Eliot believes that unlike "old
Leisure", leisure in her society has vanished. Eliot presents this
argument through a handful of strategies including personification, tone, and
repetition.
"He
was a contemplative, rather stout gentleman, of excellent digestion, - of quiet
perceptions, undiseased by hypothesis: happy in his inability to know the
causes of things, preferring the things themselves." This is one example
of Eliot using personification in her presentation. By referring to "old
Leisure" as "he" and turning it into a person, the audience is
able to get a better understanding of that time’s leisure. The audience can
conclude that it was a time where there were scantily any worries or complex
situations.
"Ingenious philosophers tell you, perhaps, that the
great work of the steam-engine is to create leisure for mankind. Do
not believe them; it only creates a vacuum or eager thought to run in."
This quote aids in Eliot's statement by expressing her accusatory
tone as she describes her society’s leisure. As years go by, technology
constantly improves as a result of ideas and hypotheses. Because of this,
a person cannot truly relax as they are too occupied with thoughts racing in and
out of their minds. “Even idleness is eager now- eager for
amusement; prone to excursiontrains, art-museums, periodical literature, and
exciting novels.” Through the use of repetition, Eliot is once again able to
reinstate the idea of “old Leisure” being lost. She emphasizes the fact that
people are so eager to be entertained that they are continuously thinking and,
again, not relaxing.
In conclusion, the
state of tranquility in leisure has become lost in George Eliot’s society. This
is mostly a result from people wanting to learn more, create more, and even
become more. People are never satisfied with one helpful invention as
they need to create an even more helpful invention. In “old Leisure” people
were never surrounded by these technical inventions but instead the calm
sceneries of nature. Perhaps this is why they were able to fully be free from
the world and reach a true state of relaxation.
I would give your essay a 7-6. The reason I would score your essay this way is because I feel like you had a lot of great points that you included. Also you had some good evidence that you used as well.
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